Family History Report: Write the Rough Draft from Notes

The rough draft is worth 20 points. Turn the notes on the cards into sentences and paragraphs for the rough draft. Feel free to embelish the notes with additional thoughts and explanations as shown below.Remember the anecdote will be the most interesting part of the report so take time to write it well. Try to capture the excitement of the story that your relative expressed during the interview.

Forler, Mary                August 10, 1989

           

            7 years old. sailed from Seattle to Nome, Alaska. Ship was

            stuck in ice. She climbed out on ice berg. Thought it was pretty.

            Sailors could not find her. One noticed her on ice berg. Remembered

            she liked bananas - “Here Mary. I have a banana for you.” She

            climbed the ladder to ship. Got in lots of trouble.  

            

         

         

         

ANECDOTE

        

            When my grandmother was only seven years old she sailed from Seattle to Nome, Alaska. During the trip the ship became stuck in ice. My grandmother thought it would be fun to climb out on the ice because it looked so pretty. So, that’s what she did. It must have been very cold on the ice, but she didn’t notice. She was having too much fun on the ice. She thought this was an exciting adventure and didn’t realize how dangerous this “adventure” really was. She could have slipped off the ice and fell to her death in the icy Alaskan water. Still, she was only seven years old and not thinking about safety.

        

             But the sailors on the ship knew about the dangers of ice and cold water. When they could not find her they became very worried and looked all over she ship for her. Finally, one of the sailors noticed a little girl standing on the ice berg next to the ship. It was Mary, my grandmother. He remembered she liked bananas, and he tried to coax her back to the ship by promising her one. “Here, Mary, I have a banana for you.” She thought that sounded delicious so she walked over to the ship’s ladder, climbed it, and got back aboard the ship. Once she was safely away from the ice and the cold water, she discovered how much trouble she was in. She was sent to bed early that night - without the banana.